Not bad name, copied characters from Project Nexus, not amazing choice in music and a "Meh" grade quality animation.
Try to be a litle more original (I liked the general character concept.).
Not bad name, copied characters from Project Nexus, not amazing choice in music and a "Meh" grade quality animation.
Try to be a litle more original (I liked the general character concept.).
Thanks, I really do cost Demony, try to improve to be "original".
And sorry my bad English if you do not understand, I'm speak Spanish.
The animation is honest to god flawless but the storyline was copied from Mean Girls. I mean come on, Mean Girls? Really?
The dialogue is from Mean Girls, I'm not sure what you mean by copied the storyline as in that particular scene it's literally just the girls sitting on a bed I think. I came up with a completely different scenario. I had to choose a clip that was readily available, not make my own dialogue. But thanks for the comment on the animation, it's appreciated.
Flawlessly perfect animation, and well thought of music, but the ibntro took forever and I didnt really understand much from the trailer/pilot but it got me curious to see what comes next so I think my rating is appropriate
About the intro taking too long, is it possible Newgrounds added something? I watched another guy's video last night that had a bunch of extraneous credit stuff on the front. That stuff seemed to go on forever. My video begins at the "5-4-3-2-1" part, which is only 2 seconds long, then the big monkey comes on.
I'm glad you liked the animation! If the trailer has you interested in the movie (or whatever this ends up being), than it's done its job. We've got too many trailers that give away the story as it is.
Its best to read the authors comment before you watch this short movie.
Flawless animation and amazing voice over but It was quite short but dark humored (AKA My favorite)
However, you could have improved it by adding an intro, making it longer and adding eyes to the balloon (That freaked me out, just a freaking mouth on a balloon)
Thanks! It was my first ever animation so I kept it short seeing how it took so long. I did have eyes for the balloon at one point but it looked too much like a Hellbenders character and I didn't want everyone throwing knives at my butt. Next one will be longer now that I have the hang of things and no knives in my butt.
That turned dark quckly...
Pros~
Dark humor
Made me laugh
Good 1st attempt
Cons~
Could've added voice overs
Make a more "Flashy" finish not just "Top Hats Deluxe"
The title could be better tbh
Wow, thanks for the feedback! I agree with you on the finish and voiceover Unfortunately, I had a really sore throat at the time of recording, so it would of been sub-par.
Well... I honest to god dont know what to say....
Well try to improve by adding better animation and more sounds.
Good try as a first attempt btw
Thank you!
No point in even watching this in my opinion. I will say A for effort buddie
ah yesss...another coulrophobe, ha!
Plot line was dreadful but the animation was spot on perfect. you need to focus on the voice acting a bit more but you need to drastically need to improve the story
Yea, I'll admit there was no real plot, the point of the whole video was just to introduce two of the three main characters and to get a feel of the show. However thank you for the honest review, I'll improve the storytelling in future episodes.
At first glance it looked cheesy I played it and laughed a bit. The voice acting is almost perfect and the pictures took were on perfect angles however I think there is improvement needed on your drawing skills
Thanks! I'll keep this in mind! :)
Had me laughing through the whole way. Chuckey cheese has 3 c's, a triangle had 3 points illuminati confimred XD
Hahaha to be honest I would have never known that if not for you pointing that out! Hahaha xD
email - quakenexus@gmail.com Decent artist and okay 3D Modeller
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