Flawlessly perfect animation, and well thought of music, but the ibntro took forever and I didnt really understand much from the trailer/pilot but it got me curious to see what comes next so I think my rating is appropriate
Flawlessly perfect animation, and well thought of music, but the ibntro took forever and I didnt really understand much from the trailer/pilot but it got me curious to see what comes next so I think my rating is appropriate
About the intro taking too long, is it possible Newgrounds added something? I watched another guy's video last night that had a bunch of extraneous credit stuff on the front. That stuff seemed to go on forever. My video begins at the "5-4-3-2-1" part, which is only 2 seconds long, then the big monkey comes on.
I'm glad you liked the animation! If the trailer has you interested in the movie (or whatever this ends up being), than it's done its job. We've got too many trailers that give away the story as it is.
First of all, good choice in music (I'm a Bleach fan myself) and not bad fighting animation.
However you could add voice overs as a nice effect as well as slightly better animation.
Its best to read the authors comment before you watch this short movie.
Flawless animation and amazing voice over but It was quite short but dark humored (AKA My favorite)
However, you could have improved it by adding an intro, making it longer and adding eyes to the balloon (That freaked me out, just a freaking mouth on a balloon)
Thanks! It was my first ever animation so I kept it short seeing how it took so long. I did have eyes for the balloon at one point but it looked too much like a Hellbenders character and I didn't want everyone throwing knives at my butt. Next one will be longer now that I have the hang of things and no knives in my butt.
This is just a ripped off show translated in my opinion
It made me laugh, the voice over was flawless BUT it could have been extended and/or had a little music at the end (Anything from dubstep to elevator music tbh)
That turned dark quckly...
Pros~
Dark humor
Made me laugh
Good 1st attempt
Cons~
Could've added voice overs
Make a more "Flashy" finish not just "Top Hats Deluxe"
The title could be better tbh
Wow, thanks for the feedback! I agree with you on the finish and voiceover Unfortunately, I had a really sore throat at the time of recording, so it would of been sub-par.
Well... I honest to god dont know what to say....
Well try to improve by adding better animation and more sounds.
Good try as a first attempt btw
Thank you!
First of all happy birthday.
Secondly, this did make me laugh but I was expectig more to be honest
Not bad for a test if im honest (I know its a test but you need to actually DO a proper video)
No point in even watching this in my opinion. I will say A for effort buddie
ah yesss...another coulrophobe, ha!
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